It was my first day at school. She lived on a hill and she took a zipline to school. It looked amazing but terrifying at the same time plus it also looked amazingly fun. It look’s beautiful because of the lush bush. You might be thinking that she could jump off but if she jumped off she would not be able to get anywhere and there’s wildlife,poison ivy and stinging nettle and she goes so fast down the zipline.
A wonderful piece of writing Owen. Some excellent description in it. Favourite was 'amazing but terrifying at the same time' . Great words!! I wonder if that last sentence could be two sentences though.
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